Comments for Naomi's World =] http://naomi1994.edublogs.org Just another Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 15 Oct 2009 08:58:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 Comment on MUSIC VIDEO COURSEWORK by jeanette1 http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/2009/09/20/music-video-coursework/comment-page-1/#comment-7 jeanette1 Thu, 15 Oct 2009 08:58:45 +0000 http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/?p=10#comment-7 Great Great

]]> Comment on Sitcom Essay by naomi1994 http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/2009/09/23/sitcom-essay-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-6 naomi1994 Fri, 25 Sep 2009 17:42:33 +0000 http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/?p=13#comment-6 Thx yazmina i'm glad you found that empowering and that you think my essay is good i still have some more pointers to add Thx yazmina i’m glad you found that empowering and that you think my essay is good i still have some more pointers to add

]]> Comment on Sitcom Essay by mitchellcw http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/2009/09/23/sitcom-essay-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-5 mitchellcw Fri, 25 Sep 2009 15:21:32 +0000 http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/?p=13#comment-5 Naomi, you have done really well here. You have cracked the idea behind the essay which is all about how sitcom has re-invented itself over the years to re-interest audiences which have become bored with the same old formula. Some of your phrasing around section 2 on representation needs a little redrafting - You need to talk more about the representations of race, gender and family within sitcom (not the representation of sitcom)... but the points you are making are clear and well thought through. Thanks for sharing your ideas Mr M Naomi, you have done really well here. You have cracked the idea behind the essay which is all about how sitcom has re-invented itself over the years to re-interest audiences which have become bored with the same old formula.

Some of your phrasing around section 2 on representation needs a little redrafting – You need to talk more about the representations of race, gender and family within sitcom (not the representation of sitcom)… but the points you are making are clear and well thought through.

Thanks for sharing your ideas

Mr M

]]> Comment on Sitcom Essay by Yasmina http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/2009/09/23/sitcom-essay-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Yasmina Fri, 25 Sep 2009 10:49:13 +0000 http://naomi1994.edublogs.org/?p=13#comment-4 Hiya, I think it's great you've published your essay and I think that it's really good so far. I love your representation paragraph on gender, it's well written and empowers women. Xx Hiya, I think it’s great you’ve published your essay and I think that it’s really good so far. I love your representation paragraph on gender, it’s well written and empowers women. Xx

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